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Kyousuke pulls on the bedsheet with his powerless left hand,  the surgery wound looks appalling.
Kyousuke pulls on the bedsheet with his powerless left hand,  the surgery wound looks appalling.
Sayaka's heart sinks from unable to share his pain.
Sayaka's heart sinks from unable to share his pain.
晚上的公园(异界化中)
麻美的必杀技爆裂。
魔女悲鸣着消失了。
小圆和沙耶加咽着口水旁观。
结界消失了,周围恢复成了原来的公园的样子。麻美变身解除。两个观众稍微安心了。
沙耶加 麻美学姐退治魔女的样子果然不管看多少次都觉得好帅啊~
麻美 真是的,这可不是闹着玩的。不要忘了这是真的会出危险的事情哦。
沙耶加 YES
沙耶加举起了护身用的球棒。
丘比在周围找了一圈跑了回来。
丘比 好像没有带着悲伤之种,扑了个空。
小圆 咦,又没?
沙耶加 最近好像总是没有啊。
麻美 是啊。但是也不能放着魔女不管。好了,走吧。
麻美沙耶加小圆丘比并排走在恢复了静寂的夜色中的公园里。
麻美 你们两个找到想要实现的愿望了吗?
沙耶加 没,小圆呢?
Park (within a Barrier), night time
Mami's  finishing move explodes.
Witches disappear in a scream of pain.
Madoka and Sayaka watches on from the sideline.
The Barrier dissipates, the surrounding returned to a normal park.  Mami cancels her transformation.  Both audience breaths a sigh of relieve.
Sayaka: _No matter how many times we watched, the way you fight Witches are so cool, Mami-san!_
Mami: This isn't a magic show, you know.  Don't forget that what we're doing is dangerous.
Sayaka: Yes!
Sayaka raises the bat she brought for protection.
Kyubey runs around searching.
Kyubey:  _Doesn't look like it dropped a Grief Seed.  I came up empty._
Madoka:  _Eh, it didn't?_
Sayaka:  We've been fighting nothing but duds lately.
Mami:  We can't ignore the familiars, though.  Anyway, let's go.
Mami, Sayaka, Madoka, and Kyubey walks in a row through the returned to normal night park.
Mami:  So have you figured out what you want to wish for?
Sayaka:  What about you, Madoka?
小圆 没……
麻美对困惑的两人苦笑。
麻美 嗯,都是这样的。突然叫你们考虑这个嘛。
小圆 麻美学姐许了什么愿望?
小圆一问,麻美的表情就阴沉了下来。小圆有点慌了。
小圆 不,那个,也不是非想知道不可,只是有点在意,那个……
麻美 不,没关系。也不是需要瞒着你们的事情。
麻美望着远处开始回忆。
麻美 我当时的情况啊——
麻美的回想。高速公路上的大规模车祸。濒死麻美被困在撞坏的车里,丘比出现在麻美伸出手的方向。
麻美画外 ——连考虑的余地也没有
回到现在。夜里的公园。两人因为麻美叙述的回忆稍微有些震惊。
麻美 ——我并没有后悔哦。我觉得现在的生活方式比那个时候就死掉要好得多。
麻美 可是啊,我希望还有选择余地的孩子好好考虑之后再做决定。因为这是我没能做到的事情。
沙耶加下定了决心,说出了疑问。
Madoka: _No..._
Mami smiles helplessly at the two troubled.
Mami:  Well, I guess it's hard to think of something when you're on the spot.
Madoka: Mami-san, what did you wish for?
As should as Madoka asked, Mami turns gloomy.  Madoka becomes nervous.
Madoka:  Oh, uh... You don't really have to tell me!
Mami:  _No, it's fine.  I don't need to hide it from you._
Mami stares afar as memories comes back to her.
Mami: In my case...
Mami's memory.  A major accident on a freeway.  The dying Mami is trapped within a wrecked car.  Kyubey appears in front of Mami's extended hand.
Mami (not pictured):  -I didn't have time to think about it.
Return to present.  A park at night.  The two followers slightly shocked by Mami's memories.
Mami:  -I don't really regret it.  I think my current way of life is much better than having died back there.
Mami:  But you know, if you have the choice you should think it through.  I want you to have the opportunity I didn't get.
Sayaka makes up her mind and asks.
沙耶加 那个,麻美学姐……许愿的事情,一定要为了自己吗?
麻美 诶?
沙耶加 比如说——只是打个比方。有个比起我来更需要帮助的人,为那个人许愿的话——
小圆 你是说……上条君?
沙耶加 我,我不是说了只是比如吗!
沙耶加慌乱的时候,丘比冷静的点了点头。
丘比 许愿的对象并不是非得限定为契约人,也不是没有前例。
麻美 ……可是,我不是很赞成这样。
麻美用有些严厉的声音插入反对。
麻美 要为别人实现愿望的话,就更需要弄清自己的愿望了。——美树同学,你是想实现他的愿望吗?还是说,想成为实现他愿望的恩人?
沙耶加 ……
沙耶加因为麻美的话而沮丧的沉默了。小圆慌乱了。
小圆 麻美学姐——
麻美 感觉差不多其实完全不同哦,这两种。
沙耶加 ……我觉得这个说法稍微过分了。
麻美 抱歉。但是现在不说出来,让你往错误的方向走了,你一定会后悔的。
沙耶加 ……
沙耶加沉默的想了一会儿,深呼吸,点了点头。
沙耶加 ……是啊。是我的想法太天真了,对不起。
沙耶加干脆的道歉。小圆安下心来。麻美恢复了笑容。
麻美 要决定果然不容易,你们也不用急。
丘比 对我来说还是越快越好。
麻美小戳了一下丘比的脑袋。
麻美 不行哦。催促女孩子的男人会被讨厌的哦。
麻美和沙耶加笑了。小圆堆笑,心里却很复杂。
Sayaka:  Hey, Mami-san... does your wish have to be for yourself?
Mami:  Huh?
Sayaka:  Like hypothetically... Hypothetically, all right?  Say there was someone who was worse off than me.  Could I use my wish for them?
Madoka:  You mean... Kamijou-kun?
Sayaka:  D-Didn't I say hypothetically?! Gosh!
While Sayaka panics, Kyubey calmly nods.
Kyubey:  Whoever makes the contract doesn't necessarily need to be the target for the wish.  It's not like it hasn't happened before, either.
Mami:  I can't say I like the idea, though.
Mami spoke with a stern voice in objection.
Mami: If you're going to grant a wish for someone else, then it's vital that you know what it is you're wishing for.  --Miki-san, do you want his wish to come true, or do you want to be the person who made his wish come true?
Sayaka:  ....
Sayaka falls silent, troubled by Mami's words.  Madoka panics.
Madoka:  Mami-san...
Mami:  They might sound the same, but they're completely different.
Sayaka:  That's a harsh way of putting it.
Mami:  I'm sorry, but it has to be said now. If you went ahead without realizing that, I'm sure you'd regret it later.
Sayaka:  ...
Sayaka thought in silence briefly.  Sigh heavily, then nod.
Sayaka:  You're right.  I was being a little too naïve.  Sorry about that.
Sayaka's simple apology; Madoka calms down; A smile returns to Mami.
Mami:  This is pretty difficult to deal with, isn't it?  You shouldn't rush your decision.
Kyubey:  The sooner the better for me, though.
Mami knocks Kyubey on the head lightly.
Mami:  That won't do.  Girls hate guys who pressure them.
Mami and Sayaka share a laugh.  Madoka joins in, but her heart is full of complex feelings.

Revision as of 22:41, 13 January 2013

第三话 再也没有什么好怕的了 作为实现一个愿望的代价,少女要成为魔法少女。而魔法少女必须与诅咒世界的魔女们拼死战斗——。从麻美那里知道了魔法少女的真相,小圆和沙耶加有些动摇。要实现怎样的愿望,成为魔法少女之后要做什么。沙耶加去探望因为重病入院的青梅竹马恭介时,幻想着奇迹发生。 迷茫的的小圆和沙耶加偶然在医院发现了即将孵化的悲伤之种。两人和变身成魔法少女的麻美一起往结界中走去,想要消灭魔女。 小圆在结界中向麻美表明了自己的想法。小圆的愿望是成为魔法少女,和麻美一起战斗。所以,找不到具体的愿望。一直在孤独中战斗的麻美对小圆流下了眼泪。然后约定结成“魔法少女搭档”。 到了结界的最深处,麻美和魔女交战。再也不是一个人了,麻美欣喜的战斗着。然而,等待着麻美的却是无情的命运……

Episode 3 I'm Not Afraid of Anything Anymore Becoming a magical girl is the price to pay for fulfilling a wish. As a magical girl, she must battle the cursed world of Witches --. From Mami, Sayaka and Madoka learn the truths of being a magical girl, adding to their hesistation. What should they wish for? What will they do once they become magical girls? While visiting her bedridden childhood-friend Kamijou Kyousoke, Miki Sayaka thought about the possible miracle. The troubled Madoka and Sayaka stumbled upon a Grief Seed at the hospital, ready to hatch. They, along with the the magical girl Mami, went into the barrier together to eliminate the Witch. Within the barrier, Madoka confessed to Mami her thoughts. Madoka's wish is to fight alongside Mami as a magical girl. Therefore, she couldn't find a proper wish. The battle alone Mami breaks into tears in front of Madoka, and agrees to form a "magical girl team." At the deepest part of the Witch's barrier, Mami and the Witch engage in battle. No longer alone, Mami battles with glee. Yet, what awaits Mami is a merciless destiny...

【A部分】 恭介的病房 恭介坐在摇起的病床上。沙耶加坐在照顾病人用的椅子上。 沙耶加 这个给你。 来探病的沙耶加把小提琴CD递给恭介。恭介吃惊得瞪大了眼睛。 恭介 哇,好厉害……这个是网上都买不到的绝版碟。 沙耶加 是,是么……回家路上偶然在店里看到了,就买下了。 床头的桌上堆着一些其他的CD盒,都是沙耶加买来的。 恭介 一直以来都谢谢你了。沙耶加是发现稀有CD的天才。 沙耶加 哈哈,哪有……只,只是运气好罢了,大概。 沙耶加害羞得结巴了。 恭介马上打开了盒子,把CD装进了便携CD机里。 恭介 这个人的演奏真是好棒。沙耶加也来听听看吧。 恭介只戴上了一只耳机,把另一只递给了沙耶加。 沙耶加 好,好吗这样…… 恭介 虽然很想用音箱来听,这里是医院嘛。 因为耳机线不够长,沙耶加斜身贴近了恭介,心里害羞得不得了。 但是曲子一开始,优美的旋律就让心情平静了下来。 沙耶加沉浸到了优美的旋律中。 沙耶加小时候的回忆。 恭介在小提琴发表会上潇洒的演奏,沙耶加出神的看着他。 沙耶加睁开眼睛,注意到旁边的恭介正在悄悄的哭。 恭介的左手无力的耷拉在床上,手术创口惨不忍睹。 再也无法进行演奏的手指寻着演奏的记忆微微颤动着。 沙耶加的心因为无法消解的苦闷而胀痛。

Part A Kyousuke's Hospital Room Kyousuke sits on top of a raised bed. Sayaka sits on the caretaker's chair. Sayaka: _This is for you._ The visitor Sayaka hands over a violin CD to Kyousuke. Kyousuke acts stun with his eyes widen. Kyousuke: _Wow, amazing... You can't even buy an out-of-print edition like this on the Internet. _ Sayaka: _Ah, really... I found it in a store on the way home, so I just bought it._ Kyousuke: Thanks for all you've done. You're a genius when it comes to finding rare CDs. Sayaka:_Haha, not at all..._ I'm probably just lucky is all. Sayaka blushes and stammers Kyousuke immediately opens the CD case, and pushed the CD inside a portable CD player. Kyousuke: This artist's performances really are incredible. Do you want to listen too, Sayaka? Kyousuke wears only one earbud, handing the other to Sayaka. Sayaka A-Are you sure? Kyousuke: I'd really like to have you hear it from the speakers, but we're in a hospital, so... Because the headphone is rather short, Sayaka leans closer to Kyousuke, the sense of embarrassment is overwhelming. But once the music begins, the beautiful melody calm down her raising heart. Sayaka lost herself within the beautiful melody. Sayaka's childhood memories. Kyousuke looking brilliant on stage of a violin concert, Sayaka watching him in a trance. Sayaka opens her eyes, noticed the Kyousuke weaning quietly next to her. Kyousuke pulls on the bedsheet with his powerless left hand, the surgery wound looks appalling. Sayaka's heart sinks from unable to share his pain.


晚上的公园(异界化中) 麻美的必杀技爆裂。 魔女悲鸣着消失了。 小圆和沙耶加咽着口水旁观。 结界消失了,周围恢复成了原来的公园的样子。麻美变身解除。两个观众稍微安心了。 沙耶加 麻美学姐退治魔女的样子果然不管看多少次都觉得好帅啊~ 麻美 真是的,这可不是闹着玩的。不要忘了这是真的会出危险的事情哦。 沙耶加 YES 沙耶加举起了护身用的球棒。 丘比在周围找了一圈跑了回来。 丘比 好像没有带着悲伤之种,扑了个空。 小圆 咦,又没? 沙耶加 最近好像总是没有啊。 麻美 是啊。但是也不能放着魔女不管。好了,走吧。 麻美沙耶加小圆丘比并排走在恢复了静寂的夜色中的公园里。 麻美 你们两个找到想要实现的愿望了吗? 沙耶加 没,小圆呢?

Park (within a Barrier), night time Mami's finishing move explodes. Witches disappear in a scream of pain. Madoka and Sayaka watches on from the sideline. The Barrier dissipates, the surrounding returned to a normal park. Mami cancels her transformation. Both audience breaths a sigh of relieve. Sayaka: _No matter how many times we watched, the way you fight Witches are so cool, Mami-san!_ Mami: This isn't a magic show, you know. Don't forget that what we're doing is dangerous. Sayaka: Yes! Sayaka raises the bat she brought for protection. Kyubey runs around searching. Kyubey: _Doesn't look like it dropped a Grief Seed. I came up empty._ Madoka: _Eh, it didn't?_ Sayaka: We've been fighting nothing but duds lately. Mami: We can't ignore the familiars, though. Anyway, let's go. Mami, Sayaka, Madoka, and Kyubey walks in a row through the returned to normal night park. Mami: So have you figured out what you want to wish for? Sayaka: What about you, Madoka?


小圆 没…… 麻美对困惑的两人苦笑。 麻美 嗯,都是这样的。突然叫你们考虑这个嘛。 小圆 麻美学姐许了什么愿望? 小圆一问,麻美的表情就阴沉了下来。小圆有点慌了。 小圆 不,那个,也不是非想知道不可,只是有点在意,那个…… 麻美 不,没关系。也不是需要瞒着你们的事情。 麻美望着远处开始回忆。 麻美 我当时的情况啊—— 麻美的回想。高速公路上的大规模车祸。濒死麻美被困在撞坏的车里,丘比出现在麻美伸出手的方向。 麻美画外 ——连考虑的余地也没有 回到现在。夜里的公园。两人因为麻美叙述的回忆稍微有些震惊。 麻美 ——我并没有后悔哦。我觉得现在的生活方式比那个时候就死掉要好得多。 麻美 可是啊,我希望还有选择余地的孩子好好考虑之后再做决定。因为这是我没能做到的事情。 沙耶加下定了决心,说出了疑问。

Madoka: _No..._ Mami smiles helplessly at the two troubled. Mami: Well, I guess it's hard to think of something when you're on the spot. Madoka: Mami-san, what did you wish for? As should as Madoka asked, Mami turns gloomy. Madoka becomes nervous. Madoka: Oh, uh... You don't really have to tell me! Mami: _No, it's fine. I don't need to hide it from you._ Mami stares afar as memories comes back to her. Mami: In my case... Mami's memory. A major accident on a freeway. The dying Mami is trapped within a wrecked car. Kyubey appears in front of Mami's extended hand. Mami (not pictured): -I didn't have time to think about it. Return to present. A park at night. The two followers slightly shocked by Mami's memories. Mami: -I don't really regret it. I think my current way of life is much better than having died back there. Mami: But you know, if you have the choice you should think it through. I want you to have the opportunity I didn't get. Sayaka makes up her mind and asks.

沙耶加 那个,麻美学姐……许愿的事情,一定要为了自己吗? 麻美 诶? 沙耶加 比如说——只是打个比方。有个比起我来更需要帮助的人,为那个人许愿的话—— 小圆 你是说……上条君? 沙耶加 我,我不是说了只是比如吗! 沙耶加慌乱的时候,丘比冷静的点了点头。 丘比 许愿的对象并不是非得限定为契约人,也不是没有前例。 麻美 ……可是,我不是很赞成这样。 麻美用有些严厉的声音插入反对。 麻美 要为别人实现愿望的话,就更需要弄清自己的愿望了。——美树同学,你是想实现他的愿望吗?还是说,想成为实现他愿望的恩人? 沙耶加 …… 沙耶加因为麻美的话而沮丧的沉默了。小圆慌乱了。 小圆 麻美学姐—— 麻美 感觉差不多其实完全不同哦,这两种。 沙耶加 ……我觉得这个说法稍微过分了。 麻美 抱歉。但是现在不说出来,让你往错误的方向走了,你一定会后悔的。 沙耶加 …… 沙耶加沉默的想了一会儿,深呼吸,点了点头。 沙耶加 ……是啊。是我的想法太天真了,对不起。 沙耶加干脆的道歉。小圆安下心来。麻美恢复了笑容。 麻美 要决定果然不容易,你们也不用急。 丘比 对我来说还是越快越好。 麻美小戳了一下丘比的脑袋。 麻美 不行哦。催促女孩子的男人会被讨厌的哦。 麻美和沙耶加笑了。小圆堆笑,心里却很复杂。

Sayaka: Hey, Mami-san... does your wish have to be for yourself? Mami: Huh? Sayaka: Like hypothetically... Hypothetically, all right? Say there was someone who was worse off than me. Could I use my wish for them? Madoka: You mean... Kamijou-kun? Sayaka: D-Didn't I say hypothetically?! Gosh! While Sayaka panics, Kyubey calmly nods. Kyubey: Whoever makes the contract doesn't necessarily need to be the target for the wish. It's not like it hasn't happened before, either. Mami: I can't say I like the idea, though. Mami spoke with a stern voice in objection. Mami: If you're going to grant a wish for someone else, then it's vital that you know what it is you're wishing for. --Miki-san, do you want his wish to come true, or do you want to be the person who made his wish come true? Sayaka: .... Sayaka falls silent, troubled by Mami's words. Madoka panics. Madoka: Mami-san... Mami: They might sound the same, but they're completely different. Sayaka: That's a harsh way of putting it. Mami: I'm sorry, but it has to be said now. If you went ahead without realizing that, I'm sure you'd regret it later. Sayaka: ... Sayaka thought in silence briefly. Sigh heavily, then nod. Sayaka: You're right. I was being a little too naïve. Sorry about that. Sayaka's simple apology; Madoka calms down; A smile returns to Mami. Mami: This is pretty difficult to deal with, isn't it? You shouldn't rush your decision. Kyubey: The sooner the better for me, though. Mami knocks Kyubey on the head lightly. Mami: That won't do. Girls hate guys who pressure them. Mami and Sayaka share a laugh. Madoka joins in, but her heart is full of complex feelings.